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Maybe cuts release the pain

thats stored so much within.

It shows myself that my rightfull place

is inside a garbage bin.

Maybe cuts distract me from

everything I must forget.

The memories that eat me alive and

the people I shouldn't have met.

Maybe cuts help me see

I'm not even worth a cent.

I dont deserve to be treated well

who cares if I'm given a dent?

Maybe cuts remind me that

I'm broken beyond repair.

Something tells me no one likes

a doll with rips and tears.

Maybe cuts tell me that

its time to end it all.

The world won't care and neither will you

so just leave me where I fall.

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My friend confessed a few things to me and i wanted to do something to show that i knew how he felt.
its submitted as an entry in :iconwriters--club: literary tournament aswell.
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authorofthings Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013
wow, this is deep. i hope you friend's alright
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sasorifan132617 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
your poemsare awesome they make methink differently and i like that about them
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angellove94 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2013   Writer
this is realy good dear :( i have a issue with cutting also
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dannyboy1994 Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:/ i find that "broken" people are the most loving and caring. the most worthy to love.they are the ones who understand pain
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Mimibert Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
woah. deep. but yeah hes like the nicest guy you will ever meet. thats totally true :D
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dannyboy1994 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yea. I figure people out. And I'm normally pretty good about it ^^
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BlakKillerKat Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You really have a gift, and this poem is so beautiful, I can't find any words to describe it.
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Mimibert Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
aww thank you so much <3
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Animeprincess1990 Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Oh gosh, i really relate here. I hope that you and your friend are alright. But anyway, great poem~ i love the way it flows
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Jiingle Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
I like in my head silently was saying me for some of this .-. how did you center this? I've always wanted to know how to center my poems ^^;
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Do you mean formatting-wise?
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Mimibert Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I took the basics of what my friend told me his life was with cuts and depression. I tried to emphasize and center it on cuts bacuse thats kinda what stuck me as the most strond and prominent feel.
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nicoolabstract Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. My heart goes out to you. It's a struggle I know far to well. Keep on keeping on Hun!
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TheChesherCat Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow, this is very powerful.
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Iceworlf Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013
OMG i know how she feels this is so good wat ur doing for her
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Mimibert Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thanks :3 i just wanna say he isnt alone </3 breaks my heart :(
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Iceworlf Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
HE (sorry bout that) isnt i havent personally b ut i have friends who have and its terrible :(
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Mimibert Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it is terrible ;_; i feel good trying to help him this way because.. im not really sure how to any other way.
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Iceworlf Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2013
Well u r helping it's truly terrible what they have to go through
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